Double Page Spread Experimenting

In my teacher feedback, I was adviced to experiment with the black and white effect. However I am not so sure about it and prefer the photos all in colour as it looks more like a photobooth picture which I liked the effect of.

Here I have tweaked little parts of my article to improve it, have added a line as the crease in my double page spread, added a page number in the bottom right hand corner and added the publicist name beneath the article, which was on my to-do list.